Staring at a Symphony of Lightning Bugs

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  1. Your opening 2 lines suck the reader in. If not, they aren’t breathing. Very involved and fascinating work. The only criticism I would make– too many questions in that stanza of questions? Seems to slightly drag on. Otherwise– A plus.

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